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What a refreshing poem. I loved it. Thanks for sharing.
03/20/10
I enjoyed your opening of this free verse poem (describing a wave). This had the ebb and flow poetic motion of the ocean. You have some great word choices too, "across the skimming surge he licks the salt" and "propelled by power beyond his frame." Nice work!
Excellent descriptions and actually refreshing. I think I even did see God smile as He watched one of His creations, ride that wave!
03/26/10
June, congrats on placing in the top fifteen of Level 3! Be sure to check out the highest rankings on the forums:

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