The Official Writing Challenge
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It's in a great devotion form. it sounded a little preachy to me, I wished you had shown me by your characters actions.

But it is a lesson everyone needs to hear at least once in their lives. You did an excellent job tying the scripture into your message.

Your prayer was beautiful and very heartfelt.
You brought up a convicting point - so many don't use such opportunities to pray for others. I agree it's a little preachy; you can slip the message within a story or recollection. Nicely done devotional.
Excellent message! Such a need for one such as this and it is the first time I have seen it addressed. I prayed your prayer and feel very blessed to have been a partaker in your article!
Good food for thought. Thank you.
This is a great lesson! I feel the beginning paragraphs could be condensed quite a bit - it seems redundant - but from there it's an outstanding devotion and a good message for ALL to meditate on.
Living the Christian life is not always easy and involves work, at times. You have a challenging message. Very nice!
You did a good job of pointing out a lot of issues in a short devotional format, and summarizing it well at the end.