The Official Writing Challenge
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What a wonderful story to be told on a dark and spooky night.
02/27/10
Good story. Boys being boys.
Ditto the other comments. Plus excellent characterization and Dink's slang type dialogue worked very well.
03/03/10
This story flowed really well and moved right along at a good pace. I enjoyed reading this. :) You had a few grammar mistakes, but this piece was enjoyable still.
03/03/10
Very good, I hope it places.