The Official Writing Challenge
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Great "slice of life" writing with a cool twist at the end. Very good!
I like the technology angle - made for a nice change. I'm afraid however that I lost the plot at a couple of points.
How sad that we still judge one another by the way we look. Great message.
It's incomprehensible to me how people can behave as the lady in the store! Though, I know they do. God bless the MC for not giving into hate and bitterness. Am I right in thinking that her fiance designed the game? Great story.
This story sent a great message to all of us. Great writing.
Loved the fiance and the message in your very well written story.
Loved the wandering inner dialogue going on within your MC's head - I've had those "huh" moments, too. Good message, subtle, but well told.
Very subtle, very well-written... and no, I didn't guess where this was going! Good job.