The Official Writing Challenge
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I read this to my little niece, and she loved it!
02/02/10
I can visualise a child bouncing up and down on his grandma's knee as she reads this chaotic story.
It wasn't anywhere near as bad as you let on in your hint!
02/04/10
I'm trying to see this thru a child's eye, and it still misses being a good children's story. The child asked for friends and other than the dog I don't see the other animals filling that bill. There is definitely a huh moment though. That is it's not making much sense.
An adorable story of a child's faith. I could see this as a picture book. Nice job!
What a delightful story. I can picture every word. Well done.