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01/28/10
Ahh, what a story. I liked the picture of the MC you painted and I was curious to see what she was going to muse about. Good thoughts. Thanks for sharing!
01/29/10
You did a good job of capturing the MC's "hungerin'" for the Lord. I've been there and need to go there again.
01/30/10
I like your title. Good expression of our hunger for the Lord. Keep writing.
02/04/10
Hey Rachel, the highest rankings were just posted on the forums, congrats on placing 6th in Level 3! Awesome job, you can view the rankings here:

http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?t=28619
02/09/10
Really good! I love how you weave the message in with the story.