The Official Writing Challenge
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Quite a thought-provoking devotional. A little more detail (show emotion, pain, etc.)and a bit more relaxed in the dialogue of Sue's thorn will put this over the top. Love the encouragements to be thankful and allow God to have His perfect work in us.
Good analogy.

For me, as a beginner writer, the opening dialogue was not realistic. It was too sugary and dramatic.

Interesting literal take on the thorn in flesh issue,
01/18/10
Thanks for sharing. This is a well done, thought provoking devotional.
01/18/10
Good points, great scripture. You need to make the conversation more realistic. Think how you might have said it. Keep up the good work. blessings, ruth
01/18/10
I agree with the other comments about the dialog. This is a wonderful devotion with a great message. Sometimes we do have to bear our thorns, but when we accept them they become easier to bear. Thank you.
01/19/10
Thought provoking - meaningful - interesting piece of good writing. Challenging devotional! Thanks - Colin