The Official Writing Challenge
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12/11/09
Lots of colorful descriptions.

As a beginner writer,I am wondering more about your MC. How did he get to all those places? How had he attained the brain injury? How did he overcome?

Is this based on a true story?
12/16/09
I enjoyed this journey with Georgio as he drew my attention to the massive amounts of color God has put into our world. Nice job with the topic.