The Official Writing Challenge
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12/03/09
Wow seemed so realistic. Very well written. Blessings to you.
12/07/09
I liked the voice you established here. Some of the sentences felt a little forced, jostling the reader out of the narrative, but strong entry and great creative take on the topic!
12/08/09
What a unique POV! I was very intrigued by this story.
12/08/09
Wow!

I was wondering how you would tie in the color brown...you did so very well!

Great entry
12/09/09
Powerful piece.

A remarkable bit of inner soliloquy.