The Official Writing Challenge
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This stoty is absolutely hilarious. Good job with your characterization of each personality. This is a well-written, entertaining piece. (Laugh, laugh, chuckle, chuckle.) I could visualize all of it, including Mr. Wright.
I thought we might be in for some intense rifle-ry, but this was good fun. I actually know a bloke called Jim Wright. should I warn him, congratulate him - or should we try and keep his wife wright out of the picture?
A fun story - I was hoping she would have had to shoot clay pigeons with blanks. Colin
"A cross between Elmer Fudd and Rambo" I love that! Great fun to read. :)
It's pouring rain outside and dreary so this was just what I needed to lift my spirits. What a great read! Big time kudos!
This is totally delightful! One of my favorites this week--I hope it does well.
Oh I love this! (You got me at Biltmore House!) Your last sentence is perfect for hubby hunting Hannah.
too funny! "a cross between elmer fudd and rambo". oh my, where did this one come from! Incredible
What great characters you've created! And and realistic dialog is wonderful. The beginning was a little slow for me, but then you caught my attention and held it all the way through to the groan of an ending. Very good!