The Official Writing Challenge
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11/27/09
This stoty is absolutely hilarious. Good job with your characterization of each personality. This is a well-written, entertaining piece. (Laugh, laugh, chuckle, chuckle.) I could visualize all of it, including Mr. Wright.
11/29/09
I thought we might be in for some intense rifle-ry, but this was good fun. I actually know a bloke called Jim Wright. should I warn him, congratulate him - or should we try and keep his wife wright out of the picture?
12/01/09
A fun story - I was hoping she would have had to shoot clay pigeons with blanks. Colin
12/01/09
"A cross between Elmer Fudd and Rambo" I love that! Great fun to read. :)
12/02/09
It's pouring rain outside and dreary so this was just what I needed to lift my spirits. What a great read! Big time kudos!
12/02/09
This is totally delightful! One of my favorites this week--I hope it does well.
12/02/09
Oh I love this! (You got me at Biltmore House!) Your last sentence is perfect for hubby hunting Hannah.
12/02/09
too funny! "a cross between elmer fudd and rambo". oh my, where did this one come from! Incredible
12/02/09
What great characters you've created! And and realistic dialog is wonderful. The beginning was a little slow for me, but then you caught my attention and held it all the way through to the groan of an ending. Very good!