The Official Writing Challenge
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11/27/09
This was a well-written acrostic. I especially liked the powerful Truth of your last stanza.
Enjoyed this acrostic! Never thot of the color orange in such vivid detail
Very original idea. You've done a great job thinking this through. For the most, the rhythm and rhyme is very good. Well done.
12/01/09
great imagery. so many colors in orange?
12/01/09
I love the rainbow images.
12/01/09
Very creative entry and strong message. Nice work!
12/02/09
Oh, you've got to admire someone who writes a rhyming poem for 'orange'! And you managed not to have to rhyme the horrid word even once. This was great fun to read.
Well done. Great message.
12/02/09
I am inpressed! What a wonderful poem, loved the ending. Well done!