The Official Writing Challenge
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11/23/09
I had to laugh. Some kids are amazing! What a good move on the intern's part!
Well, this strung me along until the last word. I couldn't wait to see what your "little giant" was going to say. I enjoyed this. Well done.
11/24/09
Ha ha ha! That's funny! I've seen kids use similar tactics and sometimes it works!
11/30/09
Sweet story with a great MC (so believable and likable). Good pace, the action really moved along well. And the whole thing totally made me giggle!