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11/15/09
I never had money when I was a college student. I can't imagine retail therapy then. I like your splashes of Spanish in this piece:)
Fun story!
11/17/09
I read your story con mucho gusto... usted escribe muy bien... well written story... I enjoyed it very much.
11/18/09
Giggle... loved the splash of color all through this!
11/18/09
This was so cute! Great voice for your MC, although I agree that as a recent college graduate, I couldn't relate to having retail therapy while in school. I love the "spanglish"!
11/18/09
Good job on the Spanglish. Cute story...now pass the dark chocolate M&M's. : )