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11/12/09
I like the way you showed -not told in your stry. It flowed well.
This was too cute! I loved the ending.
11/12/09
I agree that you told the story well. Good action.
A fun read. Good use of the topic. Nice ending.
11/15/09
The Italian characteristics come through in this clever story!
Cute, funny, entertaining and great character study with the uncle. Enjoyed it very much!
Loved the ending! Great story.
11/16/09
A very fun read! Watch your punctuation.
A lesson in never assuming anything..."Purple beaked" now that is funny. Nice and creative take on the subject.
"Grape" little story! I enjoyed the read.
Really good characterization of the Italian uncle. Cute ending, too. This was a fun read. Thanks for sharing.
11/16/09
Wonderful pacing!
02/28/10
Patricia, I'm going to feature this delightful story in the Front Page Showcase for the week of March 15. Look for it on the FaithWriters home page--and congratulations!