The Official Writing Challenge
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11/07/09
How beautiful! Sometimes, too, I think the ill hang on for loved ones and need to be released. I've had that experience.
11/09/09
Love this format! Very well done!

Teensy suggestion: Capitalize all significant words in your title. In this title, it should be every word.

What an inspiring story!
What a terrific format for this topic! Good story.
11/12/09
Your story was heart-warming. I had to smile at Jacob's request (and your title in relation to that). Nicely written! (I know a family that has a Matthew, Mark, Luke, and John.) :)