The Official Writing Challenge
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10/30/09
I think I know that girl in black.

Good work.

May God bless.

Sincerely,
Dan Blankenship

11/02/09
Enjoyed the story. Liked the twist at the end. Nice job.
11/02/09
Cute story of the conflicting feelings of loyalty and green envy.
Thanks for sharing. Colin
I like your writing style - flows nicely and easy to read. Great twist at the end of the story.
11/04/09
The opening grabbed me, quite forcibly too! Crisp sentences just fit so well with the emotion. Wasn't expecting that twist at the end either.
11/04/09
Wow. Just wow. Incredible twist at the end to pull the whole story together.

Great job!
11/04/09
Ilike your story telling. Well done.