The Official Writing Challenge
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10/29/09
Very nice story about Missy-Green! I always go outside the lines when I color!

May God bless.

Sincerely,
Dan Blankenship
You definitely stayed on topic in this story. Great description of Missy and an entertaining read. Very well written.
Great characterization in your charming story. The details brought Missy to life. Excellent writing...and right on topic.
10/31/09
A very nice story and the writing was very good also.
11/02/09
Lovely story telling - really enjoyed this one. Great writing. Colin
Very delightful story and enjoyed the vivid descriptions.
11/02/09
Best writing I have read this week. Easy to follow, enjoyable, likable characters, on topic,...just great! I half expected her to be wearing a green wedding dress! :) Good job!
Charming story. Love the little girl. Kudos for this entertaining piece.
11/04/09
You portrayed this character so well, I could just see the little girl, sitting primly in her chair and coloring oh-so-carefully with her green crayon. I really enjoyed this sweet, gentle tale!