The Official Writing Challenge
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10/29/09
Very nice story about Missy-Green! I always go outside the lines when I color!

May God bless.

Sincerely,
Dan Blankenship
10/30/09
You definitely stayed on topic in this story. Great description of Missy and an entertaining read. Very well written.
10/30/09
Great characterization in your charming story. The details brought Missy to life. Excellent writing...and right on topic.
10/31/09
A very nice story and the writing was very good also.
11/02/09
Lovely story telling - really enjoyed this one. Great writing. Colin
11/02/09
Very delightful story and enjoyed the vivid descriptions.
11/02/09
Best writing I have read this week. Easy to follow, enjoyable, likable characters, on topic,...just great! I half expected her to be wearing a green wedding dress! :) Good job!
11/02/09
Charming story. Love the little girl. Kudos for this entertaining piece.
11/04/09
You portrayed this character so well, I could just see the little girl, sitting primly in her chair and coloring oh-so-carefully with her green crayon. I really enjoyed this sweet, gentle tale!