The Official Writing Challenge
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10/20/09
I love stories where a "seeming" tragedy is a step to something better. I followed Nina, with all the emotions of the story. I wanted more at the end. :)
10/20/09
I loved the beginning so much. I'm still smiling about it, actually. The "real world" part seemed a little rushed and I lost some of my connection to the MC because of it, but I liked the ending and how it brought a kindling of hope back.
10/20/09
I loved the title, fit the story perfectly! Great ending :-)
Very unique! I like it.
10/20/09
Well written. I'd love to see it as a longer story too!
10/21/09
One of the Best. Titles. EVER.