The Official Writing Challenge
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10/08/09
Oooooh, very good! When I first started reading, I was thinking "What??", but when I finally began to realize what was going on, I was delighted. How unique!
I will add my Oooooh to this one...In one word, Wonderful!
10/11/09
Excellent and unique way of telling a story I can relate to.
Chilling tale - wonderfully told.
Once again, you have written something very thought-provoking. Your skill with words is apparent. Nicely done.
I'm feeling really dense. I almost get it...but not quite. I can catch a glimpse of what's going on, and it's really cool.
You captured me immediately. Loved it!
10/14/09
I love reading your stories, even when I still have questions after a 2nd read. ;) Enthralling tale, and the ending was awesome.
10/15/09
So sad...
I love all the symbolism.