The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 358 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
10/09/09
Very good free verse--and I especially enjoyed your unique closing thought. Very intriguing!
10/09/09
In your free verse, you seem to understand and use very well the techniques of concentration and interruption, which results in focusing, slowing and potentially stopping time. Your piece is very sensory imagery based. Nice job.