The Official Writing Challenge
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09/18/09
Really enjoyed this, it was very relatable. Good writing.
09/22/09
I liked your progression of thoughts during the different decades. Your ending made me glad that she had no regrets and was happy where her life had taken her. Your title related well to your story.
09/25/09
There's something " to thine own self be true"-ish about this story... I rather liked the repetition of the grandmother's influence, and the dancing butterflies.
09/26/09
Kathryn, You captured the journey quite well, in fact so well it brought back memories I had forgotten. Nice job.