The Official Writing Challenge
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The ending snuck up on me and provided a great finish to an enjoyable story. Well done.
09/22/09
Didn't really feel this one, yes it had all the elements for the 'prodigal son' but didn't really connect.
09/22/09
What an ending to an enjoyable story. I loved the tie-in to the Biblical father-prodigal son story.
09/24/09
A nice surprise at the end...this will probably rank well. We will soon know!