The Official Writing Challenge
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08/19/05
Shades of C.S. Lewis. Good intrigue and fight scenes.
08/19/05
I really enjoyed this- great descriptions.
08/20/05
Whew, I'm glad he didn't die and this wasn't another tear jerker.

This had a very Native American feel to it. I'm curious how you will turn it into a Godly spiritual theme without losing the Native American feel to it. (If this is who I think it is)
08/20/05
Oops, sorry, I forgot to tell you I really liked it.
08/20/05
Hi! I liked the descriptions - they were alive and vivid. I can see how this is turning into a longer story...