The Official Writing Challenge
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08/30/09
Very good, kept my attention all the way through. I like your voice, and the dialog is great - very natural. You may have wandered a bit too far away from "infant", tho.
09/01/09
Well written story, but it might have fit better if the category had been "siblings" or "brothers."
Very well written. Kept my attention throughout. Nicely done.
09/02/09
I loved reading about these two little boys. Good job.