The Official Writing Challenge
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07/23/09
Very creative and clever. A great message, too.
07/25/09
Clever piece. As one who has a sole survivor in a car crash, I can relate. We should do more to teach our teenagers to heed wisdom that is learned by much pain and suffering.
07/27/09
A very creatively written piece about something that has also been troubling me. There have been so many teen accidents in our state over the past couple of years.
Creative and quite clever. Very nice bit of writing. Well done!
07/29/09
A very sober message, cleverly presented. Thanks for sharing this!
07/29/09
Well cell phones can do just about anything in the hands of these teens...
Interesting POV.
Mona
07/29/09
Wow. Powerful stuff. What a sad ending, carries quite a punch.
Very creative and clever. A very sobering piece. Well done.
07/30/09
Sorry, I was more than half way thru before I realized it wasn't a girl that was trapped somewhere but a thinking cell phone. I'm not terribly fond of poems that take that long to clue you in to what is happening or inanimated objects having thoughts.