The Official Writing Challenge
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07/17/09
It's good to receive such nudges and reminders. You seemed to take a long time before you got to your 'special encounter' including a couple of red herrings. I suspect it would have been better to trim the beginning and develop your conversation with the gardener.
07/22/09
VEry sweet story with a good message! I did wonder if there was "danger in the bushes" but it was good to know that it was just a soft breeze. :) Thanks for sharing!