The Official Writing Challenge
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07/10/09
"High-heeled pumps daintily kissed the concrete walkway" ... love that line, one of many skillfully crafted sentences in this well-written piece.
Oh, how tender and sweet. I nearly cried at the end. Such a lovely reunion.
07/13/09
This is absolutely beautiful. So very well done. Thank-you.
I felt so sorry for this lady and so happy her dream was met. Very nice.
07/15/09
I have tears in my eyes. Thank you!
This is one of your best--story tender, characterizations excellent, and descriptions lovely.
07/15/09
Some of the things that came to mind when reading your story were: beautiful, interesting, creative, descriptive and well written. Thanks - Colin.
07/15/09
I really love some of the descriptive phrases you used. Very beautiful.

I was HOPING Kmiri would show up... yeah! Well done!
A tender story, wonderfully written...well done.
07/15/09
Wow, this stirs so many emotions...just lovely. Wonderful writing...