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06/06/09
Great job pointing out the finer things of life. As humans we see what we lack, not what we have. This couple had the love of a “family” nothing could beat that.
06/08/09
Beautiful! The 2 were so touching and real and pointing out the MAIN thing in life - relationship! Totally enjoyed this!
06/08/09
I enjoyed this very human treatment of the combination of bitterness and sweetness in life. Thanks for writing!
06/08/09
Very good interesting down-to-earth story. Enjoyed! Thanks, Colin.
What a great story interpreting the theme. I loved this - it was so human. I felt I could really get inside Rose' and Charlie's life. Well done.