The Official Writing Challenge
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05/16/09
Lovely charmer. You captured the joy of young ladies entertaining in a tree top palace.
05/18/09
A sweet story. I thought the third paragraph wasn't needed (or could be much shorter). It takes a while to get to the heart of this piece. The dialogue is perfect for this piece.
Great story. Dialogue wonderful. Nicely done.
05/18/09
The world is your oyster when you have a King Daddy-O and Queen Mommy-O.
Special story, blessed children.
Mona
05/19/09
What a heartwarming story! I loved the little girls with their pretty names and unique personalities! :)
05/20/09
Good dialogue with sweet characters (love the names!)
05/20/09
Charming and sweet. Just the way a tea party should be.
05/20/09
A very sweet story. I love the three girls! I don't really see the "bad" here; you may be weak on the topic category, but the writing is strong. Nice job!
A very sweet story. I always wanted a tree house as a child. Love your characters.