The Official Writing Challenge
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05/17/09
You had me worried. What a difference a "good" nanny made. I was transported to that home with the little twin girls. Your title is so unusal, but makes perfect sense after reading the story.
05/21/09
once there was a good sister and a bad sister.... Well, this bad little sister never made it in time to leave a comment BEFORE the week was up so i have to do it AFTER.
good story.like the use of the accents for the nannys. hope deferred makes the heart sick... glad this hope was fed!
05/21/09
Thank you, ladies! Didn't know if my readers would get that the second nanny is Hope. That's what the name Esperanza means in Spanish & Italian. Thus literally Hope feeds. :-)