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Topic: In and Out (04/30/09)
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TITLE: Twelve Hours | Previous Challenge Entry
By Beth Muehlhausen
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The cuckoo bobs
His head and nods
Each time the clock strikes a new hour
Up in his tower
Can’t walk or talk
Between tick-tocks
But waits within so quietly
Not being free
In still of night
He’s perched for flight
Inside the clock he waits to shoot
Outside and toot
The doors fling wide
And from inside
He jumps on springs with a loud shout
And a new count
At one o’clock
He doesn’t gawk
But sings and backs into his house
Quick like a mouse
Waiting so still
With patience nil
He’s cramped and achy head to toe
Ready to crow
The clock strikes two
And the cuckoo
Deftly escapes for twice as long
With double song
Then swept inside
He must abide
And patiently keep calm and cool
As per the rule
When three shows up
That bird erupts
From his closed doors on loaded springs
Sing-sings-and-sings
Retreats once more
To face the door
As he sits crouched inside the clock
Like a stiff rock
At stroke of four
Bursts through the door
Cuckoo-cuckoo-cuckoo-cuckoo
Quadruple whew
Confined within
He tucks his chin
While hunched up close in the tight place
Devoid of space
But soon his song
Becomes quite long
As out he pops and calls five times
With cuckoo-chimes
Then zip and zap
The doors slap-snap
And leave him mute and hidden well
Inside his shell
Minutes creep on
Toward certain dawn
Till bobble-head announces six
And backward flicks
The minutes roar
Inside the door
Where clockworks tick and tick and tock
And tock and rock
The family wakes
To fresh hot cakes
While reveille the cuckoo bawls
With seven calls
He’d like to hop
On table top
And nibble breakfast with them too
But they’ve no clue
Then right at eight
They dissipate
And tho’ alone the cuckoo blasts
His eight calls fast
The spring zooms back
With him on track
To wait an hour till the next chime
Which comes at nine
Time doesn’t quit
So with quick wit
Our bird jumps out for nine cuckoos
And sings the blues
He seldom rests
Without a nest
Inside the clock where he might sleep
While minutes creep
With ready eye
He heaves a sigh
And shouts ten blasts of raucous noise
Like boisterous boys
Once more inside
He tends to hide
So well no one thinks he’s alive
Waiting to jive
Eleven calls
Take lots of breath
He belts them out with bug-eyed zeal
The cuckoo’s peal
Time to retreat
Before the feat
That takes his breath twice every day
Singing away
At noon the door
Opens once more
For twelve long calls he thrusts his neck
A pecking wreck
Silence and shouts
And ins and outs
Define the life of cuckoo-ville
Where he counts still
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It had me smiling throughout
And then laughing out loud.
At that point, that's a shoe-in!
Great job. :)
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mind is eaten
So I have beaten
the kids who ate it up today.
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