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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: Beginning and End (04/16/09)

TITLE: For Life
By Karlene Jacobsen
04/22/09


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The windshield wipers whined against the window as they moved back and forth providing a hypnotic rhythm. Kelly leaned back in her seat, cradled her head in her hand and leaned on the door. A sleepy yawn escaped. “Are you tired?” Martin grinned as he stole a glance in her direction from the driver’s seat.

“Exhausted…” Kelly shifted searching for comfort. “Did we throw a blanket in the back?” A chill ran through her body like a volt of electricity.

“Yeah, it’s right here,” he reached effortlessly into the backseat retrieving the quilted throw he always kept in the car for his girl. In the beginning of their relationship he learned how easily Kelly caught a chill. “There’s a pillow, too. Do you want me to get it?” The base of his voice cloaked and warmed her as he spoke. There was no mistaking the depth of his passion for her.

“Mmmm…” she purred as she snuggled down into the blanket. Within seconds, she was squishing and stuffing a soft flannel-covered pillow between her face and the cold, damp window. “It’s like a dream, isn’t it?” her voice like silk flowed from her lips.

His hand swallowed hers, “Yeah, this is only the beginning, Mrs. Daniels.”

She chuckled, “We’ve had several beginnings, haven’t we?” She asked as she remembered the day they met, which was also the day they started high school. There was also the time they went to college together and then graduated and began their new careers. Now, they were beginning married life and their own family.

“Yep, we sure have.” The husky tone of his voice suggested he was thinking along the same lines. He gave her hand a gentle squeeze. “We’ve also thought our lives were coming to an end a couple times. Remember when you broke up with me?”

“How could I forget? I thought you were cheating on me…” she began to laugh now as she thought about him sneaking around with her best friend. She acted so ridiculously jealous when she caught them at the restaurant hugging. He looked up and saw her just as she was turning to run from the building. “I felt so silly when I found out she was helping you pick out an engagement ring!” Soon both of them were trying to catch their breath.

They talked and giggled, sharing their memories of the beginnings and endings of their life as a couple. Everyone but them knew they would one day meet each other at the end of the aisle of an ornately decorated church and begin a life as one flesh until the day they quit breathing.

***

Brandon reached in the back of his car and pulled the aged quilted throw and walked back to the shivering form of his mother. “Here Mom,” He wrapped it around her shoulders and in rapid up and down movements, rubbed her arms to generate warmth for her. He watched steam pour from her mouth as she stood there gazing at the church where her life with Martin began. “Come on, you should get inside; it’s so cold out here.”

“Yes, I suppose we should.” In a daze, she allowed Brandon to lead her into the church and up the aisle to where she would meet her husband as she said her final good-bye and their life together would be officially over.

Her other three children waited for her at the front of the church. Together they walked to the beautifully carved casket. As they held each other, Kelly cried. She looked down into the silent face of her husband, “The dream is over my dear, for now. One day we’ll begin again when I meet you in Heaven.”


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Ruth Ann Moore04/23/09
A beautiful walk through the lives of your characters; so many wonderful beginnings.
Kimberly Michalski04/23/09
Wow. This evoked a lot of emotions for me. Nice.
Bryan Ridenour04/23/09
Very vivid picture of a couple's beginnings and beginnings again. Nicely done.
Dena Wilson04/28/09
A great picture of a life as a married couple
Joy Faire Stewart04/28/09
Very tender story with a great flow. I enjoyed the characters' journey.
Jan Ackerson 04/29/09
I felt very fond of this family as I read this lovely story.
Beckie Stewart04/29/09
This brought tears to my eyes and was well written. Great job.
Carol Slider 04/29/09
A very beautiful and realistic portrayal of the marriage journey. Good work!
Joshua Janoski04/30/09
This piece definitely fit the week's topic. The first part reminded me of me and my fiance and how we are going to be starting our lvies together. The end reminded me of the bitter truth that someday we will depart from each other here on this earth, but what a glorious reunion in Heaven it will be!

Good job with this one. :)
Norma-Anne Hough 04/30/09
Truly moving and beautiful. Well done.