The Official Writing Challenge
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03/05/09
This totally went a direction I didn't see coming:) Very good writing.
03/05/09
I read the first half with question marks flooding my mind. I read the last half with exclamation marks! Love your style!
As I read the first half, I marveled at the research you had to have done for this piece. The second half came out of no where and really held my attention. Very creative way to look at this subject.
03/08/09
I could feel the tension building in the first half, as you described the trees. I guessed that the bonsai trees were a nefarious training metaphor, but I thought that the "agent" worked for an evil human dictator... not THE evil dictator! Great job of putting Screwtape in another context!