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Your story bears many good points. We can learn about other countries just by talking to our neighbors who came here to the land of opportunity. This is a very well written article and the mother was very wise in the way she handled her daughters situation. Loved the ending.
I thought the secene-setting was a bit long and the article really got going when your MC decided to interview the European emigrees. Would it have been possible to start at that point, and then flashback to why she was doing it?