The Official Writing Challenge
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02/19/09
Thought provoking approach!
02/19/09
I enjoyed your piece, and how it brings the reader around to God who answers our prayers.
02/20/09
Your imagery is wonderful, and I love the parallel of the extended metaphor between the false and the true.
You probably already noticed, for future reference, that the R is missing in "everlasting.
02/23/09
You created a picture with the descriptions and then added the truth to this scene. Good work.
02/23/09
Fascinating, and I love the contrast in the second and final stanzas.