The Official Writing Challenge
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We both base our stories in Guyana. We both have Nalini as characters, but I must admit that your story is much more touching than mine. It always breaks my heart to read about the exploitation of young children.
Gripping writing.
02/16/09
I felt the girl's pain. Great writing.
02/17/09
Very good. The scene in the cane field is especially gripping. I'm glad she got away, and I love that Samuel brought her to a church. Maybe she'll find her way home in more ways than one.