The Official Writing Challenge
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01/31/09
Sarita is a WONDERFUL little girl! I wanted to scoop her up in my arms!

I was unclear of some of the relationships. Is Jamie a teacher in the school? Is she also the principal's sister? If so, why does she refer to her as "Principal Morris" in the narrative?

With a few things like that cleared up, this is a delightful entry.
A delightful story. I loved that Mom took charge over Sarita's childhood and whether she was troubled.
Aw, this was sweet! Loved the little Sarita and what a pretty name!
02/04/09
Ahhh... I can see you in little Sarita...living in your owned created world. I love it..don't ever grow up completely, Sara!
I recognized delightful Sarita right off. Wonderful characterization. I wanted to snatch her up and hug her!