The Official Writing Challenge
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You have captured the true Christmas Spirit. I just loved this so very much.
When I find myself complaining, I will think about your little story.

You need to separate the paragraphs a little bit for an easy read for your readers.
11/30/08
Other than the paragraph separations I found this to be very well written. Good job.