The Official Writing Challenge
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11/20/08
What a beautiful story, and well worth circulating.
Wonderful, loved it!
11/21/08
A very touching story, and a reminder of the importance of introducing children to Jesus before other pressures of life crowd in.
Very sweet and very touching. I enjoyed reading this.
I enjoyed this touching memoir.
Perhaps stars or dashes could be used to mark the change from past to present. Also, I think it might have been just as or more effective to have written the entire story in first person, eliminating the POV shift.
You have, indeed, been given a wonderful legacy and treasure!
11/25/08
This was a very special memory yu shared, thank you. It was well written, and I enjoyed hearing the story.
What a wonderful memory. I really enjoyed this. :)
Loved this and the message. I really liked the way it was told, so authentic and genuine. The entire story line was well developed and engaging to the reader. Loren
11/26/08
This was beautiful andI have goose bumps. Well Written. Loved your Grandma. Neither of mine knew our Jesus. Thanks for sharing yours with us!
11/26/08
My favorite part is where she (you) is looking at the book, and prays for her siblings and cousins - her first Christmas understanding the meaning of the holiday. Lovely writing.
As I read, I kept thinking how wonderful it would be if my grandchildren remember that I read their toddler Bible to them. Thanks.
I love the message in the story. Well done.
Love,
Norms