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Oh a medieval Christmas story... wonderful. I could visualize the whole scene. Believable characters, good story. Well done.
10/10/08
I enjoyed the immersion in this setting quite a bit. Maybe a bit more conflict, to really pull the reader along?

Well written, and you did a great job with the dialogue.
This is so sweet and lovely. Purely enchanting; I love this story of a young girl being welcomed into the festivities of a young lady.

It is one of my favorites.
Beautifully written story and very enjoyable.
10/15/08
What a wonderful story! I just love it - the atmosphere, & the excitement and joy of your MC. You have such a gift! :)
An enchanting story beautifully told.
Lovely! Good descriptions and emotions. Loved it!
10/15/08
I was drawn in by your descriptions. I could see it all. In the midst of so much turmoil in our world, I enjoyed this escape to your peace-filled story!
10/16/08
Excellent job! I liked this piece a lot! :)
10/16/08
Well-written; nice imagery.

One small note: double check all of the descriptions to make sure the blend well. I had to reread the sentence about tearing open the present with gentle hands...I just couldn't picture that one.

Nicely done. A fresh take on the topic.
10/16/08
Lovely descriptions and a wonderful job with atmosphere. Love the end especially. Good stuff, dear Sawa!