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10/09/08
I almost expected that Alice would have gotten pregnant! I liked it -- I wish one of the verses in Psalm 37 would have been mentioned:
"Delight yourself in the Lord, and He will give you the desires of your heart." I felt for the character in the story,, thank you for writing this.
10/10/08
Sweet, heartwarming story.

You may have skirted around being "on topic" a bit, but I enjoyed your protagonist's attitude, and this is well-written.