The Official Writing Challenge
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09/12/08
The imagery is superb! Is this intended as an allegory, or am I reading too much into it? Absolutely beautiful...
09/13/08
Wonderful, descriptive words. Beautiful story. Very well written. Good job.
There is only one word here that I can say, or maybe I should say it with two words:

Breath Taking !
This wonderful, love it. Congratulations on your win. Great job!
09/18/08
Congratulations on a phenomenal piece of writing. Wow.
09/23/08
WOW--A+++ for the word pictures packed into this piece. Congrats on your EC placement. Interesting read.