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09/05/08
Perhaps you stopped someone from starting a life-time addiction. You've given a perfect illustration of peer pressure. I had to smile at your ending "that figures, it sounds like something you would have done."
09/05/08
I too, had to smile at the last line. Big lesson here, for such a short story. Well done!
09/05/08
Sounds like having to "tattle" was more traumatising to you than all the other drama. Yet, on the day of accounting, you saved the day. Good story.
09/06/08
Good story, and I'm glad you tattled. Years ago when I was twenty I smoked two cigarettes - and understood how people got hooked! I'm glad you were able to keep your friend from smoking!
Good story and sounds like a group of kids. Glad you had the courage to tattle.