The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a superb poem from the rhyme down to the perfect meter. The message was clear and forceful and I could almost hear it being read in church or in front of a large gathering. I very much hope this entry earns the top placement it richly deserves.
Wow! How powerful! I admire your talent for writing poetry. The topic was carried through without fail. Strong flow, pattern, rhythm, meter, rhyme - everything, but especially the MESSAGE. Absolutely beautiful. :)
Excellent! Love the rhyme and the rhythm kept it going.
This is a good witness to the lost. Great job!
This was so well done that I saw it unfold before my eyes as I read it. Thanks!
I enjoyed this poem so much, I went back and read it aloud. Wonderful message!
Wow! This poem is amazing. Wonderful rhyme, perfect meter and an incredible message. I sometimes stumble when reading poetry, but this just flowed.
This is beautiful. All the way through, my heart took on the journey with you.
This is so, SO powerful and excellent. What an incredible piece with an incredible message. So glad I got a chance to read this.
Helen, this is wonderful poetry.I love it, and what a message. God Bless you my friend. Elizabeth.
Oh Helen, this is a beautiful poem from start to finish!! I see that many people agree with me. It is a winner in my estimation! Good job! Thanks be to God for helping a countless number of saints find that narrow path. Linda
A vision everyone should be given. Loved the way this flowed.