The Official Writing Challenge
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I really liked the images the you evoked. The blending in of brain surgery was almost surreal. Is this a true story?
You have wonderful imagery in a powerful poem--excellently written.
Absolutely wonderful...
Loved the imagery, and I think you covered all the senses - I could taste, touch and feel my way through each stanza...
Beautifully done!
The poem really carries you along. But the ending is surprising. Great images!
Wow... That ending was really powerful completion to a sweet poem.
You've left me speechless... I hope you win an EC with this one.