The Official Writing Challenge
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07/17/08
I really liked the images the you evoked. The blending in of brain surgery was almost surreal. Is this a true story?
You have wonderful imagery in a powerful poem--excellently written.
07/18/08
Absolutely wonderful...
Loved the imagery, and I think you covered all the senses - I could taste, touch and feel my way through each stanza...
Beautifully done!
07/23/08
The poem really carries you along. But the ending is surprising. Great images!
Wow... That ending was really powerful completion to a sweet poem.
You've left me speechless... I hope you win an EC with this one.