The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a creative. I kept waiting to see how the topic would come in, and you surprised me with the ending. Entertaining.
Imagine working in such a plot twist on such a short story. Great Job!
Oh, I wasn't expecting the end and loved it. Excellent job!
A nice story with a curveball at the end...well done!
Wow, I sure didn't expect that! A great twist, although I wish you'd had more words so that you could develop the back story a bit more--like a whole NOVEL, maybe!

Love the mention of a cat--a sure way to get me to love a story.
I think we may have a placer here. Engaging all the way to the end. Great twist--keep writing.
What a wonderful, moving story. I just love feel good, happy endings.
Oh the ending, the ending! I absolutely LOVE, LOVE it! This is great-definitely one of my favorites for this week. It's new and fresh, the voice, the characters, everything. I enjoyed the whole read, especially the revelation-what a lovely surprise! ^_^
Wow, what a surprise ending. I'd love to know more of this story. Very intriguing. Nice job with the topic.