The Official Writing Challenge
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02/29/08
I was engaged in this tale from the beginning. I loved the contrast between the brothers, with the realistic thought process of the brother who chose to do the right thing. What a great lesson for all of us as believers.
03/01/08
Great setting and story, something I think we all can relate to in one way or another.
03/06/08
Congratulations on your highly commended. You did a good job bringing this Bible story to life.
Congratulations and thanks for this version on the parable. I hope someday to be good enough to attempt retelling a Bible story, this is inspiring.
03/06/08
Congratulations on your well-deserved Highly Commended! :)