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03/02/08
Wow…every parents nightmare! Your story is heartbreaking…but I think Megan learned from it …. I was so glad your story ended the way it did. I could feel the mother’s relief. Great title -- which I didn’t appreciate until I’d finished reading your story. Very nice work on this.
03/02/08
What a terrific ending to this sad tale. It's amazing to think how this scenario is a reality to so many women out there. YOu did a great job with the message and the topic.
03/02/08
Great story for teens to read--if your church has a youth group, give this to their leader. It's amazing how many girls get trapped in this situation.
03/03/08
You slipped out of tenses several times but overall a good read.
03/09/08
Great story, kind of like a parable. It sure put the point across. You told the story well, and brought out the theme of actions speaking louder than words. I hope it gets into the hearts of many young people who take infatuation for love and don't make the same fatal mistake that Martha made. Good for you....Helen