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02/21/08
I liked seeing this story from Reuben's perspective, and it is a great illustration of the proverb.
02/21/08
I liked the way you told this story. Good job.
02/22/08
I love the way you made this Bible story so personal. Excellect writing.
02/24/08
Great POV, and very good writing all around. I enjoyed this very much.
02/24/08
I love this from Rueben's viewpoint. I know the story but your ending still had the power to give me chills. Excellent writing with this!
02/25/08
Awesome job bringing this Biblical event to life! Excellent!
Laury
Thanks for taking be into the heart of this familiar tale. Great title as well.
02/25/08
A very well-told story. I love your repetition of "he didn't like it" - very effective. I was engaged throughout.
09/23/08
You could feel his stomach tied in knots! Very good writing - took me back.