The Official Writing Challenge
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02/14/08
Wow, talk about temperment change and quick turnarounds and all of that. This was different, but it seemed that the characters changed a little too quickly (even though they were Rhinos) and that sort of made the end didn't quite fit, but I'm glad that they did work everything out and got their priorities straight that it wasn't about the car, but them. Nice work. ^_^
02/14/08
Great title, and a good illustration of the proverb.

I found the attitude change a touch abrupt - but I don't suppose there's much you can do with the word limit.

Your descriptions were very vivid. Nice job.
02/15/08
A great story with a perfect title. Masterfully told - well done.
02/18/08
Liked the title (caught my eye) made me curious to read. I agree with some of the other commenters, their turn around was a little abrupt and we saw it coming when she drove off in a huff. All in all not a bad job keep writing.